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Possible Titles

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I feel like I’m wrapping my collection up. It’s about as good as I can get it right now given where I am as a writer (possibly terrible, possibly OK), but who the hell really knows what will happen with it. I don’t feel done – I feel like I have a long way to go with it still. Soon it will be out of my hands and then back in and then out again.
I have no idea what I should call it or rather I have a list that I’m unsure of:
Unscheduled as a storm
Distance between two moths
A direction of knees
Where air has no architect
No matter what I do
(My??) eyes blue with wild
Things I’d never tell you
Lawn Chairs
Reasons you don’t love me

Part of me is leaning toward “Things I’d Never Tell You”

Thoughts??

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4 responses to “Possible Titles”

  1. Ms. Moon Avatar
    Ms. Moon

    No thought but a suggestion- go to sleep and dream on it. Perhaps something will make itself known.

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    1. rachvb Avatar
      rachvb

      I’ll see if I can will my subconscious into making decisions for me 😉
      Thanks, Ms. Moon. I’ll let you know in the morning. xo

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  2. Marylinn Kelly Avatar
    Marylinn Kelly

    “Things I’d Never Tell You” lunged at me. It gives a summary of what poetry signifies for me – the previously unspoken. Just casting my vote. xo

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    1. rachvb Avatar
      rachvb

      I’m so glad! Because that is exactly the one I picked. Yes, it encompasses the things I can only say through poetry and that’s why it is so important to me and to people who read poetry. There is no where else to say such things. Thank you! xoxo

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